Thursday, July 21, 2011

Composition

I got the sudden feeling of posting this. This is a simple poem dedicated to someone special. Petz, this is for you ;


Composition

Composition wasn't that difficult
Till I met you
Similes, metaphors, colourfull words
Could flow easily without any obstacle
My mind was open to catch them all
But you weren’t there, that day
Our eyes met each other
Yours were blank and how were mine?
Could you read them or
Just felt as me?
You made it difficult…,
The composition of poetry
You were as pretty as …. who?
Am I to say Venus?
Your eyes were as bright as….. what?
Am I to say sun?
Your hair was flying in the wind
Was it a wave of the sea?
No, it deserves something better
Was it a ringing bell?
Your laughter, do I mean
But, what can a bell do with it?
Were you a magician to mesmerize me?
Who now protects my heart
With immense love and affection

2 comments:

  1. Ohhh! Lahiyru, what a composition is it. It made my eyes wet & wonder if I could do a similar for my beloved too. You are amazing. I am pretty sure of one thing, your Petz should be so lucky to met you as her LOVE. We welcome you for more blogs as always. Wish you all the best with your future life!!

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  2. Thank you dear Kalani.Your words are most welcome and they encourage me a lot.

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